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Aztec Adventure Page 3 by Carliihde Aztec Adventure Page 3 by Carliihde
This is page 3 of 6 (2 are a double page spread) of an Aztec Princess being sacrificed. She is then cut loose my a shapeshifting God where she falls into the jungle and plunges into the water where there is an Aztec demon waiting for her.
The whole story was penciled and inked by me.

Comments and critiques are always welcome!
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cerebraleye Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I love the idea that you had the woman go into the aztec relief on the bottom. Very cool storytelling element there. I will say that the water that you have her dropped in looks a bit furish (not real word). The feathering you have in the water makes me think of fur or hair instead of water. In panels one two and three I like the action of the drop and swim. Yet, there is not a lot of bubbles in the water as she falls from air into water. Looking at pictures of diving will have you see that the water curns with airbubbles around them as they enter. Love the lady though. Very nice work on her. Looking at the page again, I have a bit of confusion with the top for panels and the bottom panels. I don't know if the bottom is a border or part of the picture. It almost looks as if the aztec motif is part of what is going on. If you were going for the motif to be a boarder then maybe including the stonework in the relief might have helped. If the motif was not part of the panels above then the story flows nicely. Keep up the great work Carli! The page looks great, just nit picking.
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Saito-san97 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Myy...this is incredible.i love how you inked it and the story too of course!:D
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Carliihde Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Professional General Artist
:) Thank you so so much!
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Kenyu05KR Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Your inks are so incredible, like seriously, as clean as the pencils.
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Carliihde Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Professional General Artist
:) Thank you so much! I try to make it look like that!It's good to hear that I've succeeded
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Kenyu05KR Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
yeah totally, very good technique, that's hard to master. So you're welcome!
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DarkKnightJRK Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Absolutely gorgeous--I really like the top-left series of panels, it feels kinda like a steady shot, like she could have done that in one fluid motion. :)
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kartoonist Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Professional General Artist
the flow of this works exceptionally well. my only critique would be the pupils in the third panel. Her left pupil is either too small or her right pupil is too big. your inks are wicked, is it all brush?
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adampedrone8 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
this one is awesome
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DerKlox-Cloxboy Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
Your pen work is damned impressive.
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Carliihde Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much! Actually almost all of these pages are done in brush
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DerKlox-Cloxboy Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
Ah, right on. Great work.
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firewinged-angel Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student
She kind of looks like you! Fun!
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